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Postby Bee » Tue Feb 14, 2006 11:48 pm

She looked around only to find herself alone on the bus until a small fluffy white poodle jumped into her lap. The bus driver turned to her and...
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Postby giz » Thu Mar 02, 2006 6:55 am

and ignored her completely and said to the poodle

"no dogs allowed"
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Postby Bee » Thu Mar 02, 2006 11:52 am

Sarah jumped in surprise when the dog turned to the driver and said, "I'm not a dog my name's Cheepi." Cheepi jumped down from her lap and...
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Postby John R » Thu Mar 02, 2006 12:29 pm

...Ran off the bus. Sarah and the driver both looked at each other in disbelief! Shit, this is one strange day thought the driver, a talking dog, whatever next? 'Stop that dog!' screamed Sarah, who then...
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Postby Yakumo » Tue Mar 07, 2006 4:39 pm

was run over by the bus as the driver was still reminiscing on how strange a day this was.

Sarah survived the impact of the ten ton London bus by a sheer fluke .....
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Postby giz » Wed Mar 08, 2006 4:36 am

because the kevlar vest underneath her coat had absorbed most of the impact.
She then checked her gold heart-shaped pendant around her neck carefully. Thank God she sighed inwardly, the cleverly hidden micro transmitter & mic had not been damaged....
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Postby John R » Wed Mar 08, 2006 5:48 am

...not that any of it mattered because seconds later she was slapped and kicked by a passing mob of rebel teenagers who filmed it on their mobile phones. Within days it was on the internet...
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Postby Bee » Thu Apr 06, 2006 10:24 am

...and Sarah hoped that if any good would come out of her experience it would be that Zak would see it and come to her. She still thought of him frequently and was deep in thought whilst lying on her bed when...
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Postby i_heart_nefie » Thu Apr 13, 2006 10:33 pm

...the television came on and she saw zak on the news. he was arrested for...
"I would very much like to come hunting with you please...." - Little Mem
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Postby Yakumo » Fri Apr 14, 2006 5:20 pm

ordering a tall skinny latte with marshmallow and chocolate flake and a tall whipped non-fat cream chocolate cinnamon mocha latte.

Apparently in this parallel universe where tax law is studied to the Nth degree it is totally illegal in tax terms to order this particular set of ingredients in that way.

Sarah felt for Zak as she knew only too well the delights of these drinks ordered this way, and with that resolved to ......
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Postby Bee » Sat Apr 15, 2006 1:29 am

...go to his rescue. She thought up a plan and made her way to the door when THE RELIC (an old lady with a cane) bust through her door and was about to tell her, her future when...
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Postby i_heart_nefie » Sat Apr 22, 2006 3:12 am

.....the rebel teenagers came bursting through her door! she tried to defend herself but couldnt because...
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Postby Bee » Sun Apr 23, 2006 9:59 pm

...she was wisked away by a whorl of wind and found herself in front of...
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Postby Kate4Tanus » Tue Apr 25, 2006 11:33 pm

a telephone box. She was about to call her mum, when...
'You were ever more than a tutor to me,' Memnon answered softly. 'You where the father I never knew.'
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Postby Bee » Wed Apr 26, 2006 4:01 pm

...she picked up the phone and the line was cut...
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Postby Kate4Tanus » Thu Apr 27, 2006 1:29 am

...she slammed down the phone and was about to exit the telephone box when...
'You were ever more than a tutor to me,' Memnon answered softly. 'You where the father I never knew.'
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Postby Matbow » Thu Apr 27, 2006 4:11 pm

Sarah and the Jellified Mushroom; a story of love, intrigue and hope.

Sarah was walking home from a stressful day at the office, when all of a sudden she dropped her favourite Wilbur Smith book of all time, River God at the feet of A 6'5" surfer, coming back from spending the afternoon at the beach after a morning spent stacking shelves at the local walmart.

"Dude, this chick's hot" thought Zak, "I wonder if she'd like a tall whipped non-fat cream chocolate cinnamon mocha latte from Starbucks?" Zak proceeded to ask, when, all of a sudden a runaway strand of lush black hair swept across his face, smelling faintly of the kiwi-scented shampoo that had just ran out this morning. "Yeah!" replied Sarah "That would be cool, but I can't go now because my dog is in labour at home and is going to be giving birth soon. But if you want you can comewith me and watch!"

Zac, who had a fear of blood, was hesitant to answer when an alien from planet Xdneo suddenly appeared and shot him with his stun gun. "Arghh!" screamed Zac, as he dropped to the floor. "How did you find me? I've been hiding inside this ping pong ball for years. I thought it had a super duper cloaking device!" Sarah ran towards Zac when, all of a sudden Zak pulled a kipper from his inside pocket and slapped the alien around its face. The alien, with a bemused look on his face uttered an indiscernible noise and skuttled behind the nearest bin. Zak quickly composed himself and took Sarah's hand in his as they ran down the street towards Starbucks! Zac was astonished to find that Sarah ordered a tall skinny latte with marshmallow and chocolate flake for him and a tall whipped non-fat cream chocolate cinnamon mocha latte for herself.

It was at this point he recognised the interconnectedness of all things and promptly vanished into thin air! Sarah screamed as she dropped her drink. The mysterious hunk had just disappeared and along with him her only chance of happiness, or so she thought. Yet Zac had accidentally left an intergalactic gargle blaster strategically placed on the corner of a small damp towel. She drank the intergalactic gargle blaster and was immediately transferred by the infinity drive to a big red bus.

She looked around only to find herself alone on the bus until a small fluffy white poodle jumped into her lap. The bus driver turned to her and ignored her completely and said to the poodle, "No dogs allowed". Sarah jumped in surprise when the dog turned to the driver and said, "I'm not a dog my name's Cheepi." Cheepi jumped down from her lap and Ran off the bus. Sarah and the driver both looked at each other in disbelief! Shit, this is one strange day thought the driver, a talking dog, whatever next?

'Stop that dog!' screamed Sarah, who then was run over by the bus as the driver was still reminiscing on how strange a day this was. Sarah survived the impact of the ten ton London bus by a sheer fluke - the kevlar vest underneath her coat had absorbed most of the impact. She then checked her gold heart-shaped pendant around her neck carefully. Thank God she sighed inwardly, the cleverly hidden micro transmitter & mic had not been damaged.

Not that any of it mattered because seconds later she was slapped and kicked by a passing mob of rebel teenagers who filmed it on their mobile phones. Within days it was on the internet and Sarah hoped that if any good would come out of her experience it would be that Zak would see it and come to her. She still thought of him frequently and was deep in thought whilst lying on her bed when the television came on and she saw zak on the news. He was arrested for ordering a tall skinny latte with marshmallow and chocolate flake and a tall whipped non-fat cream chocolate cinnamon mocha latte. Apparently in this parallel universe where tax law is studied to the Nth degree it is totally illegal in tax terms to order this particular set of ingredients in that way.

Sarah felt for Zak as she knew only too well the delights of these drinks ordered this way, and with that resolved to go to his rescue. She thought up a plan and made her way to the door when THE RELIC (an old lady with a cane) bust through her door and was about to tell her, her future when the rebel teenagers came bursting through her door! She tried to defend herself but couldnt because she was wisked away by a whirl of wind and found herself in front ofa telephone box. She was about to call her mum, when she picked up the phone and the line was cut. She slammed down the phone and was about to exit the telephone box when a dog, who looked just like Cheepi shot past the phone box wearing roller blades! Too elated to speak, Sarah quickly grabbed her belongings and ran after Cheepi.

Meanwhile, Zak...
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Postby Bee » Mon May 01, 2006 11:06 am

(Thanks for putting that together Matt!)

...sat in a small dingy cell waiting for the next sunrise as he watched the planet Earth sparkle in the distance. He could remember her kiwi scented hair and longed for her to be with him. It was then when the door to his cell flung open and...
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Postby i_heart_nefie » Thu May 11, 2006 11:31 pm

a tall man in a dark coat appeared in the doorway.
"You have a visitor" he said, and escorted Zak to the.....
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Postby Kate4Tanus » Thu May 11, 2006 11:33 pm

local pizza parlor, where they met....
'You were ever more than a tutor to me,' Memnon answered softly. 'You where the father I never knew.'
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